The shading is great, the line work is visually constructing but not restraining, the details are plentiful and well done and the inspiration can be noticed but isn't just copied or imitated, it really looks like you made your own character that started from the concept theme instead of just reproducing something that you saw. (Not that there's anything wrong with imitation or re-imagining a favorite character or theme)
Although it might be more visually pleasing if it were more bilaterally symmetrical.
Well, it's amazing, but.... that's a pencil.
*smiles* even it's name is adorable. but the background might look better with some grass or clover or something, other than that it's awesome
if I had to guess, I'd say you drew this free handed using your mouse, next time try to sketch something on paper first then scan it then trace and color it in flash from there, it will look a lot better trust me.
Also if you color somebody else's art make sure you credit them, `cause otherwise it's steeling.
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